Monday, 13 June 2016

Viking girl show not tell



She stood in front of me and shouted ‘’I want a pony’’ and I said  ‘’I’ll get you one when pigs fly’’ I replied. That's when she clicked she threw on she best viking helmet. As she was stomping towards me with rolling eyes and resed eyebrows she looks to her right then goes over and threw a lamp on the floor  and then started to throw and smash everything in site. And dangerously smash a glass bottle on the floor. And started stomping towards her room.

Wednesday, 8 June 2016

Demolition poem


I wrote this after watching room 10 get demolished


goes the big machine as it 
the ground beneath it.


as the engine roars out as the machine goes further into the building .


  as the machine snaps wood beneath its feet  


The of rubble hitting the ground at full speed.


The of the works on their lunch break .

And the of water hitting the cold dead wood as it got treated.